LBM: Haute Gothique v.1.1

EDIT: Updated version! I slimmed up the sleeves and cleaned up some areas, especially the lace. I tried to make the boots look like patent leather, but they're a bit messily rendered.


Very rough sketch.
I took inspiration from victorian funeral wear, because really, what's gother than that? Also, there's a smidgen of elegant gothic lolita in there.

Fabric would be relatively thick cotton with pinstripes( hat and choker are of same fabric). The crown charms on the skirt and choker are silver, fastened with pins and decorated with differently sized and colored ribbons. White lace comes through sleeves, black lace veil comes from hat. Boots are black leather.

The colors are a bit washed out looking because I wanted to be able to see the actual design under there. I'm iffy on the red highlights, ideas for other colors or placements?

Critiques please!